2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

作者学术词汇使用比较准确，词汇表达较丰富，但仍需增加词汇积累；全文结构较为严谨；作者应适量增加从句的使用量。

Taking a look around,we was surrounded by all sorts of news which may be wrong or misled.This is exactly what someone once predicted,"the real danger is not that the computer will begin to think like man,but that man will begin to think like the computer."We should take it seriously. Apparently,it is danger that we draw the conclusion immediately without deliberate consideration.In China,the government fails to restrain netizen make comments on online,in which case it contribute to the environment is danger and unsafe.Additionally,we unable to distinguish the news so that we may be misled by the information that we got it from the internet. Internet,for my perspective,make our world a village and make convenient to our life.However,it is important that we expand our horizons and improve our ability to evaluate the information.Only can we do it,we can make use of computer in the rational manner.