2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):手机

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It can be seen from the picture that the mobile phone has played an important role in people's life,however, many people don't use it reasonably.Now,let me tell you something about its advantage and disadvantage if we overuse it. On the one hand,I think it is convenient for people to look up for some information in the mobile phone.What's more,it not only can do this but also can be beneficial to people's communication.So the mobile phone is the modern.On the other hand,however,overusing it does harm to our physical and mental heath,and also can decrease people's interest in learning.For example,many students are addicted to playing games in mobile phone so that they pay no attention on studying.So the mobile phone is the catalyst of the degeneration. Form my perspective,everything has its two sides,so we should treat it correctly and seriously.