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A famous saying goes that do not put all your eggs in one basket. That is to say, it is unwise to stake everything on a single throw. This proverb is applicable to our daily life. For example, if a man wants to lower the risks of investments, he would better properly invest his money in diverse ways, such as buying shares, funds and insurance. Otherwise, he may lose money inevitably. What’s more, seeing all the aspects at the same time contributes to a balanced life. As students, we cannot only bury our heads in textbooks, or we are probably not able to learn anything else that can be more useful to us in our future life. In my view, to save a lot of headaches and ensure a balanced life, we are supposed not to put all our eggs in one basket.
