2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

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From these dates we can learn about that education pays in 2011 and know that unemployment rate in 2011 is increasing steadily, in which the part of 'less than high school diploma' is accounting for more than half and 'Doctoral degree' percent is just has 2.5. At the same time, we found that 'Median weekly earnings in 2011'is very highly, because their average of paying are $797. Through the two sections we can draw-up a reason why there are earnings are for full-time wage and salary workers. Due to in the high price they have to pay. So from this we should take some strategies to promote people study. Like reducing the fear so that people will have less stress to study of fear and by this way they can be educated more freedoms and more happier.