2013年5月25日雅思大作文真题TASK2附范文:政府资金支持艺术

作者能较准确地使用学术词汇，但文章中拼写错误稍多；句法很棒，若适当增加一些从句的使用，文章会取得更好的成绩；过渡词和衔接词使用的比较不错。

People are involved in the discussion about whether the government should sponsor artists.I agree that it is necessary for artists to receive the government funding. Some people hold the opinion that there are many other public services such as education,technology and medical care require the government's support.It is true that these public services can improve the people's living standards.For example,because of government's financial support,the hospital and healthcare centres can supply a better service for people ,thas means thata there is a increasing number of people with advanced ages.If government support in artists, those main services may not receive adequate money to develop. On the other hand,arts is normally an important part of human life.Government should pay more attention to artists.This is because that art enable peopel to satisfy their mental needs and enrich their live.Bloosom in art is also considered as a gesture of advanced development of the whole of society.by contrast, if government does not supply adequate financial support for artists,the atomasphere of the society would not good for people's further development,it would pose a threat to people's creativity. In conclusion,Government should make the most use of funds to cover grounds including artitist and many other main public services.