学术词汇使用较丰富,拼写做的很棒;能够熟练使用从句并合理分配;可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用;请注意分段;连词使用偏少。
The issue of how to reform schools in America is one that has been debated in countries recently. It is an important issue because is reveals that the education in America exist many defects. Proponents of education reform argue that let the students study in comfortable environment is the key of lead the students become successful, while opponents say that offer the high qualified education is more effective to students. Although our high school provides high qualified teachers to teach us grow academically, the reformation of the scheduling of classes, school lunch and open more foreign language programs would make our school become better.