题目:Computer and Man人与电脑
字数:150满分:100分
作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用;作者能词汇表达较准确熟练,但请仔细检查词汇的拼写。
There are a phenomonon that hunman has enter a completely new stage.With the rapid development of economy and techonolege,computers are more and more essential in our daily life. Firstly,man can use computers to search imformation.Sometimes we need some very important imformations that we do not know,we can use computers to search them quickly.What's more,we can know many social imformation by computers. secondly,we can chat with others and see them by computers even when there are a long distence between us.It is convinient to chat with others by computers. AS far as I am concernd,we can do whatever we want to do by computers.Such as study,watch TV,play games ,buy something we need and so on.Computers have become neccessary for man.