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2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:00浏览次数:17432
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题目:Computer and Man人与电脑

字数:150满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分70.0分
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可适当增加从句和复杂句使用;文中词汇较灵活,但要注意积累学术词汇,拼写错误也要注意;上下文衔接不流畅,文章结构不严谨。

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Human race has entered a completely new stage in its history,along with the rapid development of economy and technologe,computers are more and more essential in our daily life. Firstly,the man can use computers to search information.Sometimes we need some very important informations that we do not know,we can use computers to search them quickly.What's more,we can know many social information by computers. secondly,we can chat with others and see them by computers even when there is a long distence between us.It is convinient to chat with others by computers. AS far as I am concerned,we can do whatever we want to do by computers.Such as study,watch TV,play games,buy something we need and so on.Computers have become necessary for man.

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