2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用学术词汇就更好了；作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；上下文衔接不流畅，文章结构不严谨。

Human race has entered a completely new stage in its history,along with the rapid development of economy and technology,computers are more and more essential in our daily life. Firstly,the man can use computers to search information.Sometimes we need some very important informations that we do not know,we can use computers to search them quickly.What's more,we can know much social information by computers. secondly,we can chat with others and see them by computers even when there is a long distence between us.It is convenient to chat with others by computers. AS far as I am concerned,we can do whatever we want to do by computers.Such as study,watch TV,play games,buy something we need and so on.Computers have become necessary for man.