2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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I am so glad to know you will come to visit my hometown.My hometown is not only famous for a tower built about one hundred years ago,but also with green environment and a beautiful long river.By contrast, the river is what i will show you.why?first,if you come here in summer,you must have fun swimming in the river and going boating.Particularly,when it is dark,wind touch your body softly.Second,you are able to go where you want to go by boat.It can be a wonderful experience for you.Third,you will eat fish free of charge because there are lots of fishermen catching fish every day.I hope you will come to my hometown as soon as you can.