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At first, I Think the Internet Slamg isn't Forbidden, because it is benenfical for our leaen sbjects.On the one hand,some stuents thought it is a joke,can have a great time for uses them ,it's fill in homous and smart,it's conunicate to write .On the other hand,it's not considers to write,so a large of houman don't know mean is.If you won write much it,you will be make some people don't know it ,cause it is understaning.So they think not should make much use it.