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Happiness is a goal that everyone wants to achieve,and different people have different attitudes about happiness.Therefore, the way to be happy is different.There is a saying goes like this"happiness is not the absence of problems,but the ability to deal with them",and I think it is very accurate to happiness. There is no doubt that we have to face all kinds of problems in our life,but it does not mean happiness will away from us.In the world,there are many good examples for us to follow:Steve Jobs,a man who changed the world and achieved success and happiness from many problems. However,what should we do to improve the ability to solve problems and be happy?The first step is to keep a positive mind,you have to believe there is nothing can not be resolved.Next,don't retreat when you encounter difficulties ,but to think of ways to overcome them.Finally, persistence is victory.Once get what you want through problems solving,you must be happy.