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Think Carefully There are so many people around our corner and what they do and talk may have influences to us.If we make consequence immediately when we saw or heard something from others,that will be unwise. Remembering we are the leading roles in our life,we should not always follow others.Before we make conclusion,it will be benefit to think it carefully.There were a time when a lot of peopel went to shops to buy many salts home just because the rumor 'there will be no salt soon'.That is really ridiculous but also alarms us whenerver we make end or want to something,think more will never be wrong.
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