2010年12月英语六级作文真题:高校评级

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My View on University Ranking Nowadays,it is more commonly to rank universities around the world. Somebody think that it is unfittable for students to rank universities.Among high school students,most of them prefer to get admitted by a university which has a higher status in the ranking.They don't want to understand which university they should get into by distinguishing the best subject of these universities.It is so bad for them to choose their university. But,there are some opnion by others person.It is convenient for students to choose which one they want to apply for.The ranking was based on the comprehensive function of universities.Students can make one of the best universities as their goal and try their best to make the dream of getting into the wonderfu university ture. In my opinion,it is neccesary to make the university ranking.Students can get the first news of these universities and then begin to choose which university they want to get in.