广东汕头市2013届高三上学期期末试卷英语作文

作者词汇表达丰富度要继续提升，学术词汇使用过少；作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用；连词使用偏少。

Last weekend, I had talked about that the Chinese students share their feels with psychology professor Kelly Lam. More 30% of the Chinese students did not say about happy and sad something to others person. Sharing is very important, but Chinese education is not. Some experts think that sharing is very important in this time. And we would know how to share that it's good for you.