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经常跟父母发火，甚至几天不讲话要求：
1、表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
2、必须包括所有相关信息，并作适当的发挥；作者词汇表达丰富度要继续提升，学术词汇使用过少；正确句子比例较高，适当增加复杂句的使用，文章会更出色；结构不严谨，几乎没有使用衔接词，上下文衔接欠流畅；请注意分段。
Good morning, ladies and gentlemen. Today my topic is ‘Learning to get along with our parents’.These days, most of us feel it is hard to get along with our parents. I often catch fire for them.Even I can not talk with them.So I want to find three ways to solve these problems. First,we should communication with them .For all we know, communication is very important.Second,we should help each other.Because it help us to live in harmony.Third，we also hear what they talk about patient. I hope these ways can help you a lot！
