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安徽黄山被联合国教科文组织定为世界自然文化遗产。假设外国友人到你校参观后，准备去旅游。
请根据要点向外国友人简单介绍黄山（the Yellow Mountain ）。
（1）位于安徽南部，是中国著名的旅游胜地。每年有大批中外游客前去旅游观光。
（2）乘汽车去大约要花 3 个小时；也可以乘火车或飞机去。
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2. 请不要逐字翻译
句法知识很棒，若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更出色；文中词汇表达较丰富恰当，学术词汇使用稍显不足；过渡词和衔接词使用欠丰富，层次欠清晰；请注意分段；连词使用偏少。
The Yellow Mountain lies in the south of Anhui province. It is one of the most beautiful places to visit in China. Every year, a lot of Chinese and foreigners to enjoy their holidays there. It will take you about 3 hours to get there by bus,and it is also convenient by train or by plane. you will see the sea of clouds ,wondrous pines , unique rocks and the other amazing seneries during you are climbing the mountain. If you get up early enough and are lucky enough in the morning, you will enjoy the beautiful sunrise.what a wonderful place the Yellow Mountain is! Let's go right now.
