Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
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Education Pays From the chart,we can know that the rate of unemploy rate in a Associate degree is high than those who have a Bachelor's degree.In the meantime the more education people take,the more they earns. Is it education pays worthy?Different people have different point.Some people think that education pays worth because knowledge can not only enrich there life but also mean a promising future.However,some people said that many successful people have low degrees,so they consider that it is unnecessary to pay some much money and so many time to take education. From my pespective,it's worthy to pay education and we can't emphasize the important of taking education too much.We all should do our best to expose ourselves to knowledge.