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2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

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Education pays...
Education pays in higher earnings and lower unemployment rates
Note: Data are for persons age 25 and over. Earnings are for full-time wage and salary workers.

Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.

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文中词汇较灵活,但要注意积累学术词汇,拼写错误也要注意;行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用;适当增加一些从句的使用,会为文章添彩。

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Education Pays From the chart,we can know that the rate of unemploy rate in a Associate degree is high than those who have a Bachelor's degree.In the meantime the more education people take,the more they earns. Is it education pays worthy?Different people have different point.Some people think that education pays worth because knowledge can not only enrich there life but also mean a promising future.However,some people said that many successful people have low degrees,so they consider that it is unnecessary to pay some much money and so many time to take education. From my pespective,it's worthy to pay education and we can't emphasize the important of taking education too much.We all should do our best to expose ourselves to knowledge.

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