2011年12月英语四级作文真题:坚强的意志

能够使用一些简单的从句；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用；希望学术词汇的使用能更熟练一些，还要加强单词拼写的检查。

As a saying goes,"nothing succed without a strong will".Strong will,a faburs spirit,is the vital promising of sucess.Take my friend as a example,he's insist on get up at 5:00am everday to recite the English word at the exam come. consequently,he get a high score in the finally exam. The indvidual whose will firmly will come to her great mission.MaYun is fair to the exam three time ,but he not belived it just bring advantage to her,therefore he create company about internet suffer from a sea of diffculty and has been a successful man finally.That's why he can finsh her mission is that he has strong will,and confident. As a student,we shoud devote a lot of energy to study,if we not take the study seriouly,we can't be a useful persion forever.