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One of my foreign freinds is going to visit my hometown. I will take him to eat seafood if he is interested in it, for there is famous of seafood. We can spent time to swam at the eage of the sea. that s brilliant and relax. And then we will graze and take photos in the field. My hometown is the countryside, nothing special for fun but having fatastink envirement.
