2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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One of foreign friends is going to visit my hometown. I will introduce him to eat seafood if he is interested in it, for there is famous for seafood. We would spend time to swam at the eagle of the sea. And then we will graze and take photos in the field. My hometown is the countryside, nothing special having fun but have fantastic environment.