2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

文中单词拼写做的很棒，再多积累些词汇就更好了；文章层次不够分明，缺少组织，需注意文章整体的组织结构；采用了一些简单的从句；请注意分段；可以适当增加副词的使用；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开。

One of friends who is a foreign is going to visit my hometown. I will introduce him to eat seafood if he is love to, for there is famous for seafood. We would spend time to swam at the eagle of the sea. And then we will graze and take photos in the field. My hometown is the countryside, it s nothing special having fun but have fantastic environment.