2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

作者词汇量偏少，但单词拼写做的不错；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用；采用了一些简单的从句；请注意分段；可以适当增加副词的使用；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开。

One of friend who is a foreigner is going to visit my hometown. I will introduce him to eat seafood if he like it, for there is famous for seafood. We would spend time to swam at the eagle of the sea. And then we will graze and take photos in the field. My hometown is the countryside, it s not special enjoying but have fantastic environment.