2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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One of friend who is a foreigner is going to visit my hometown. I am going to introduce him to eat seafood, for there is famous for seafood. We would spend time to swam at the eagle of the sea. And then we will graze and take photos in the field. My hometown is the countryside, it s not special activities but have fantastic environment.