2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

拼写很棒，可适当增加学术词汇的使用；可适当增加从句和复杂句使用；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用。

From the chart,we can know that the rate of unemployment rate in Associate degree is higher than those who have a Bachelor's degree.In the meantime the more education people take,the more they earn. Is it worthy to pay for the education?Different people have different points.Some people think that education pays worth because knowledge can not only enrich there life but also mean a promising future.However,some people said that many successful people have low degrees,so they consider that it is unnecessary to pay some much money and so many time to take education. From my perspective,it's worthy to pay education and we can't emphasize the important of taking education too much.We all should do our best to expose ourselves to knowledge.