2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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One of friend who is a foreigner is going to visit my hometown. My hometown is famous for seafood, so I will introduce him to eat it. We would spend time to swam at the eagle of the sea. And then we will graze and take photos in the field. My hometown is a countryside where is nothing special activity but have fantastic environment.