2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

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These days, with the boom of computer technology, our daily life and the economy runs have been utterly changed. what deserves our attenrion, however, is that we have to be clear enough that we should never be over-dependent on computer. Otherwise we are possilble to reduce to becoming it's slave. It goes without saying that computer has contributed a lot since it came to our life. It enables scientists to compute more accurately; it provides us access to the latest knews from the globe; it makes automatic production reality,thus spares much work of man. We can not deny the convenience from this great invention of hunman beings. In a sense, people can hardly live a normal life nowadays, without the cute thing. On the other hand, we know it well that computer cuts both ways. Therefore, we can not rely too much on it, for the sake of hunmans development and progress. It is man who invented computer. We can make the most of the machine but never be slave to it. If we turned to computer whenever and wherever we need to think or make decision, our rights and ability to develop our mind would be deprived, as it were. For these reason, I, as a civil in this new age, hold the idea that the best relationship between human and computer is that"you help me, while never dare to think of controlling me"