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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第43篇:独自一人学习还是跟朋友一块儿

发布时间:2013-08-16 17:19浏览次数:1790[网页划词已开启]
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作文题目:

Some students prefer to study alone. Others prefer to study with a group of students. Which do you prefer?

Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

一些学生喜欢自己一个人学习,而另外一些学生喜欢结伴学习。你更喜欢哪种呢?给出具体原因和例子。

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用户的作文(系统评分68.0分
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作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;文中词汇较灵活,但要注意积累学术词汇,拼写错误也要注意;文章层次不够分明,缺少组织,需注意文章整体的组织结构。

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As a student,we grasp anytime to learn.However,when we meet some problems or something,who can help us to judge what we should do?The answer is your firends who together learn.So in my view,i prefer to study with a group of students.And what is the benefit?I will pick 3 aspects. First of all,studying with a group of students can restrict your behaviours as you are learning.You could care about others around you and not be optional. You will be more effective in learning. Secondly,if you learn alone,you will stuck in problems which you do not good at and your friends could do it.You can not deal with anything and you need somebody's help.The old saying that Three heads are the top one。 Thirdly,learning with others will add you interests of learning.In other way,learning alone could down your spirit in some way.Together learning also can develop your worldview and your ability of solveing problems or something. In a word,perhaps everyone owns their way which to face things and life.All i siad is just my experience and feeling.Maybe it suits you or not.Above all,you should choose what suit you.

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