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这幅漫画象征性的描述了一个倒在地上的瓶子，一些牛奶洒了出来。在这个瓶子的旁边站着两个人，一个垂头丧气的说“全完了！”，而另一个则说“幸好还剩点儿！”。这幅画所表达的内容既意义深远又发人深省。
这幅漫画的目的是告诉我们在生活、工作和学习中遇到挫折时，不同的人持有不同的态度。积极乐观的人总是能够发掘事情好的一面，而消极悲观的人总是为他失去的东西伤心抱怨。总之，一个人的态度能够决定他的成败。
在我看来，我们应该向那个积极乐观的人学习。在生活中无论遇到什么样的困难，我们都应该用积极乐观的态度来面对。只有这样，我们才能取得成功。
作者词汇基础扎实；过渡词很丰富，衔接词同时使用的恰到好处；文中一些从句的使用为文章增色。
As is symbolically illustrated in the cartoon, there are several roads ahead of students emerging from collage. Such as finding jobs, applying for post-graduate study, going aboard for further study, or planning to start business. But, it seems that these students who are wandering at the crossing road, don’t have any specific decision yet. From drawing, we can conclude that the painter wants to convey the message that there are quite a few young people have no adequate preparation for the future. What first stuns the young is that there is no clear-cut road to travel on, through plenty of choice there are, however not every roads are as promising as one’s previously thought. Consequently, young people must make a decision before fully consideration. Moreover, once he make a choice, he must press on, and his persistence will be paid off finally. Undoubtedly, the earlier to prepare for the future life the better, as we could have enough time to think what we really want to be. Only if we take the responsibility of our own, can we achieve and have a wonderfully life.
