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Dear my fellow students :Recently ,I find that some fellow students lose interest in English ,I think it is so terrible .We should know the importants of English ,it plays an important part in the college entrance exam ,so we take it seriously . And here are some ways to improve English .First of all , you should be interested in English ,interest can make your heart swelled with energy.Next ,you should read loudly in the class ,don't be shy and the teachers will correct you if she finds some problem with you .Thirdly, listen some English music and try to sing it ,even see some English film . The last but not least, you should believe in that you can do it well.As the saying goes :Confidence is a half of success .That is my suggests about how to improve English ,I hope you can make great progress in English.