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I have a good teather,her name is miss cai.She looks fat,particularly lovely,also particularly sweet smile.Every day she takes good care of every students,never eccentric.She could only remember the advantages of all of us.The teather said,she don't love curse,she only love can deal with a smile every day we.I like miss cai very much.