2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

可适当增加长句和复杂句的使用；文中词汇表达稍欠丰富，可是单词拼写做的不错；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用。

There is a phenomenon in our daily life that human often make the conclusion according to they saw or heard.But it is unwise to make the conclusion immediately according to they saw or heard. As we all know,there is much misunderstand in life because of people make the conclusion quickly according to they saw or heard.They do not to hear others to explain. What they believe is the fact they saw or heard.However,sometimes they are wrong. What's more,many people make the conclusion immediately in their study.They just believe their eyes and ears,but whatever conclusion we make should according to evidences,otherwise,we maybe make the wrong conclusion. As far as I am concernder,we should master the evidences before make the conclusion.It is unwise to make the conclusion immediately according to we saw or heard.If we make conclusion without evidences,we maybe will make many wrong conclusion,and it will take much trouble for us.