作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;上下文衔接不流畅,文章结构不严谨;文中词汇表达较为丰富准确,但存在单词拼写错误。
Is not wise to drow to a conclution when we hear or look someting . Why this opinion is right? For example ,someting we hear is not all it meaning.We may just hear a part of it or wo may just understand what have happened.If we just hurry to have a conclusion in addition to we understand.You may have a wrong understanding of it.And this wrong understanding will make you have a wrong action.Gradually,you can be loser in the end.Besides ,you will miss many things ,like friends and relationship.If things develop into this step,you will be filled of regret. Therefore,we should try to watch everyting with hasetation.And after it,we must look into and think it deeply.Additionly,we need to ask some people who also have witnessed it.These actions will prevent you from having a wrong conclution.And you will be have a success in the end.
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