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Is not wise to drow to a conclusion when we listen to or look someting . Why this opinion is right? For example ,someting we listen to is not all it meaning.We may just hear a part of it or we may just understand what have happened.If we just hurry to have a conclusion in addition to what we understand.A wrong understanding you will have may make you have a wrong action.Gradually,you can be loser in the end.Besides ,you will miss many things ,like friends and relationship.If things develop into this step,you will be filled of regret. Therefore,we should try to watch every ting with hasitation.And after it,we must look into and think it deeply.Additionly,we need to ask some people who also have witnessed it.These actions will prevent you from having a wrong conclusion.And you will have a success in the end.
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