作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;文中词汇表达较丰富恰当,学术词汇使用稍显不足;上下文衔接不流畅,文章结构不严谨。
Is not wise to drow to a conclusion when we listen to or look something. Why this opinion is right? For example ,someting we listen to is not all it meaning.We may just hear a part of it or we may just understand what have happened.If we just hurry to have a conclusion in addition to what we understand.The wrong understanding you will have may make you have a wrong action.Gradually,you can be loser in the end.Besides,you will miss many things,like friends and relationship.If things develop into this step,you will be filled with regret. Therefore,we should try to observe everything with hesitation.And after it,we must look into and think it deeply.Additionly,we need to ask some people who also have witnessed it.These actions will prevent you from having a wrong conclusion.And you will have a success in the end.
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