作者词汇表达较为熟练,学术词汇使用不是很多;作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;文章层次较为清晰。
Is not wise to drow to a conclusion when we listen to or look something. Why this opinion is right? For example,something we listen to are not all what it means.We may just hear a part of it or we may just understand what have happened.If we just hurry to have a conclusion in addition to what we understand.The failing to understand of it will make you have a wrong action.Gradually,you can be loser in the end.Besides,you will miss many things,like friends and relationship.If things develop into this step,you will be filled with regret. Therefore,we should try to observe everything with hesitation.And after it,we must look into and think it deeply.Additionly,we need to ask some people who also have witnessed it.These actions will prevent you from having a wrong conclusion.And you will have a success in the end.
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