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Stop Raising Dangerous Animals as Pets Do you raising a pet? A dog or a cat? Someone has a pet as a friend would make you confort. But anybody raising a dangerour animals as pets would hurt people according recently news. It is for stimulation that people raise dangerous animals such as tiger, crocodile and others ferices animals. It is so dangerous that people were hutred by their pets.A person was bitted by snacks which is her pet,and even were ate by their pets. Those things alway happened and had been explore in news. So we should cherish our life and stop raising dangeroud animals as pets!