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内容：本人在12月15日到22日在纽约举行的展览会期间了解到贵公司产品号为5670的新产品，非常感兴趣，请贵方发给我们一份价格单和说明书。感谢贵方的合作，希望我们可以建立贸易关系。
【高频词句】
1．price list and instruction价格单和说明书
2．establish business relationship建立贸易关系
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My name is hubin.I saw the new product of your company,whose number was 5670 during the visit that was started in New from 12.15 to 12.22.And I was very interested in it.So I hope you can provide a price list and instruction for me.Thanks for your coopetation,and I hope that we can establish business relationship.
