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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第1套):以貌取人

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:04浏览次数:8982
要求:

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay explaining why it isunwise to judge a person by their appearance. You can give explain toillustrate your point .

You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words。

用户的作文(系统评分66.0分
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可适当增加从句和长句的使用;文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用;文章用了较为丰富的词汇,学术词汇略显单薄,同时注意单词拼写的检查;请注意分段。

用户练习作文:

As it said that it is unwise to judge a person by their appearance.Appearance is not meaning what they have.Some people who not have a handsome or beautiful appearance filled with konwledge in their brain.They may look like simple person,not wearing expensive clothes and not driving a glorious car. They just have a purpose of getting a low key life.Besides,focus on working may be a reason leading to they ignore dressing.For example,Ma yun who is the richest man in China have a simple appearance.He not only be the richest man but also talented and rich konwledge.Therefore,judging a person by their appearance is not wise.When we want to judge a person,we can commuticate with him and look into his behaviors carefully.A wise and well-educated man will chat to you with intellgence and politely.After chatting,you may think he is a person that you can be proude of.Luckly,he may become your friend after it.

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