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文章结构不错,使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词;复杂句使用不错,句法规范;作者词汇基础不错,不过文中存在个别拼写错误。
Sweet and graceful, a delicious pretty American girl is adressing trational chinese costume, who seems gratification with costume dancing toward us. The picture vividly illustrates that the spleedid culture are shared throughout the world, without any boundary. Indeed, culture, especially with the traits of the people, is diffused at crazy speed defying our imagination, which primarily results from the globalization. As the nations are getting closing, and the ways of communicatons are getting various, our traditional culture , such as Beijing drama, tea, china, and etc., has been popular with foreigners. Meanwhile, with no surprise, the foreign culture also exerts enormous enfluence on our life, and it can be demostrated with movies of Hollywood as well as multinational corporations. It is significant that a varity of culture can be studied and recognized by each other, in that we are exposed to new custom and idea that can broaden our horizon, spar our inspiration. Attention , however, should be payed. We should resist unfavorable factors decaying our soul amd darely benefit to thouths and do well in aborbing splend culture in. Only this way can the culture share in a wondrful way.