题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任
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Trust is the basic that people can get along well,so maintain trust between people is very important. I have a best friend and we grow together.In my middle school,one day she invited me to go to her home.After class,we went to her home together.Her families were all go out,so just we two played in her home.That day we played very happy.I went back home in the evening.However,next day she found me and said I took something in her home.I said I did not,but she did not believe me.Thereafter she leaved me,and did not play with me.Someday she found me and asked me that the things that she lost has been found.She apologized to me.I forgive her,but we could not get along as well as former. We should trust the people around us,such as our families,friends,workers and so on,didn't doubt them easily,unless we have evidences that they did something that hurt us.Otherwise we maybe lose them.