Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
拼写很棒,可适当增加学术词汇的使用;可适当增加从句和复杂句使用;上下文衔接稍显不流畅。
From the chart,we can know that the rate of the unemployment rate of people who have a Associate degree is higher than those who have a Bachelor's degree.In the meantime the more education people take,the more they earn. Is it worthy to pay for education?Different people have different points.Some people think that education pays worth because knowledge can not only enrich their life but also mean a promising future.However,some people said that many successful people have low degrees,so they consider that it is unnecessary to pay some much money and so many time to take education. From my perspective,it's worth paying for education and we can't emphasize the importance of taking education too much.We all should do our best to expose ourselves to knowledge.