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Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
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Security issue may sound cliched, but when it comes to the campus security, we have to take it seriously. Nearly every day, there are reports to the security office on campus that valuable things are stolen away. A surrounding with stealing and mugging for studyingcan’t be less impressive . In such cases, what measures should be taken to improve the campus security? On one hand, we students should strengthen our security awareness. Once we smell out something unusual, we should report it to the school security department immediately. On the other hand, more equipment such as monitors should be installed on campus so as to detect crimes as soon as possible. Besides, a proper amount of security guards should be arranged to patrol the campus. In my opinion, campus security will be improved as long as efforts are made on campus. Therefore, colleges and universities should try their best to make everyone on campus safe and heaith.
