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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:15浏览次数:40892
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文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用学术词汇就更好了;简单句比重稍微偏高,注意极个别句子错误;文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用;请注意分段。

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In high school life, we are busy all day in study, many courses and a lot of work awaiting us, we even have no reason not to complete them. Learning in an order and carrying on, each day to learn the task to be done. We are always looking for the universities to work on memory, even if in a dream we have to call it the same as calling the name of God. In short, for we are looking forward to university life and hope. This is because eating and seemed to be ideal to achieve through it. However, I am pleased that we feel that an ideal is always full and satisfied. Vision for the future, we make it through college enrichment, it is a matter of pride. Into university life, we first found in the study of life we have lost leisure time. So we can study life becomes independent, it is important that we have a lot of discretionary leisure time. In spare time, we can take a variety of colorful activities and more leisure time and increased knowledge. However, there are always things people anxiety. For example, the work of uncertainty. To this end, we are very anxious. We have no reason not to eat for their own future anxiety problems. As a result, our vision becomes difficult to touch. So our vision so that we feel bored and tired. Enrich the high school life is busy and full of expectation, the University of anxiety and fatigue life of leisure but colorful.

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