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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

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The difference between university life and high school life Having lived in university for nearly two mouth ,I m still can t get used to the life in university .Everything goes wrong .Things are so different that I can t get used to them in short period . Firstly.,it s our friends circle ,we are not study in the same class all day.we just rush from one class to another. It make it hard for us meeting face to face with others,we rely on QQ ,renren and so on,which upset the students who are not outgoing like me .but on the other hand ,it also makes our friends circle lager ,we can make acquaintance with all kinds of people . Secondly, it s our study .Not like high school,we only have the midterm and final exam ,free of all kinds of test in between.No teachers urge,no too much homework ,no test,we are free ! But things are not easy,we still have the responsibility to study hard for our parents ,for our lover and most importantly, for our bright future. Lastly, what makes university really different is its various chances.We can take part in many activities.We neednt study all day .We can do something we really love .but various chances also mean various temptation.we need make a plan for our life. Although I am not used to the life in fudan university but I belive everything will be OK,my college will be my precious memory.

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