2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用学术词汇就更好了；作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；全文结构较为严谨，应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。

In high school life, we are busy all day in study, many courses and a lot of work awaiting us, we even have no reason not to complete them. Learning in order and carrying on, each day to learn the task to be done. We are always looking for the universities to work on memory, even if in a dream we have to call it the same as calling the name of God. In short, for we are looking forward to university life and hope. This is because eating and seemed to be ideal to achieve across it. However, I am pleased that we feel that an ideal is always full and satisfied. Vision for the future, we make it through college enrichment and it is a matter of pride. Into university life, we first found in the study of life we have lost leisure time. So we can study independent, it is important for us to have so much discretionary leisure time. In spare time, we can take a variety of colorful activities and more leisure time and increased knowledge. However, There are many disturbing things. For example, some work we can not sure. To this end, we are very anxious. As a result, our vision becomes difficult to touch. So our vision so that we feel bored and tired. Enrich the high school life not only busy but also full of expectation, the University of anxiety and fatigue life of leisure is colorful.