2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

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With the development of economy and society.The online shopping has gradually became a fashion.The reasons can be listed as follows: For one thing ,with the improvement of the people's living standard.an increasing number of people have enormous power purchase.Second,convenient and comfortable is main reasons for people.becuse numerous people can buy beautiful clothes at home ,only in this way can we purchase many necessary goods.Last but not least ,we can save a lot of money and time . In my view,I hold that we can purchase goods on internet ,but we can not blingly and excessively on shopping.So we make a good and paper way to shopping.