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What we need konw is how to make best use of our life for something.The time of our life is limited,therefore,we should make a good choice of the way of we spending it.For example ,if you like dancing,you may spend most of your time in practicing dancing.You can set your own goals,and try your best to achieve your goals.It is important that you must know what is your most interesting in.The thing may be your dream,and it is worth struggling to realize.After it,you can spend you most of your time in it.Don't care about others' thinking and discussing.You just think it can make you life become more meaningful.Some setbacks you may run into,but these can not stop your step.What you should know is the process of succeeding is not easy.It is essential for you have setbacks overcomed.The more setbacks,the more harvesting you will get when you realize your dream.
