拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;句式变化多样,句法方面做的很棒;行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用;请注意分段。
In China, there is a saying, '' not a pleasure to have friends coming from afar, '', I will give my foreign friends in the capital city of Beijing.Beijing's the Great Wall is very famous, and the courtyard and so on,the city of Beijing, located in the southeast of North China Plain, about 150 miles from Bohai, an area of 16800 square kilometers. Beijing has three thousand years of history and the city more than eight hundred and fifty years of history, the first name in the record as "thistle". The period of the Republic of China, said beijing. After the founding of new Chinese, is the capital of the people's Republic of China, referred to as the "Beijing", is now one of the Chinese four municipalities directly under the central government, the country's second largest city and the political, transportation and cultural center. Beijing is the capital of the people's Republic of China, a municipality directly under the central government, China National Center City, Chinese politics, culture, education and international exchange center.