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2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:38浏览次数:71633
要求:
Suppose a foreign friend of yours is going to visit your hometown,what is the most interestingplace you would like to take him/her to see and why?
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In China, there is a saying, '' not a pleasure to have friends coming from afar, '', I will give my foreign friends in the capital city of Beijing.Beijing's the Great Wall is very famous, and the courtyard and so on,the city of Beijing, located in the southeast of North China Plain, about 150 miles from Bohai, an area of 16800 square kilometers. Beijing has three thousand years of history and the city more than eight hundred and fifty years of history, the first name in the record as "thistle". The period of the Republic of China, said beijing. After the founding of new Chinese, is the capital of the people's Republic of China, referred to as the "Beijing", is now one of the Chinese four municipalities directly under the central government, the country's second largest city and the political, transportation and cultural center. Beijing is the capital of the people's Republic of China, a municipality directly under the central government, China National Center City, Chinese politics, culture, education and international exchange center.

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