2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

全文结构较为严谨；采用了一些简单的从句；文中能较熟练地使用一定的学术词汇，但词汇表达多样性不高，拼写检查还需加强。

Nowadays,The online shopping has become popular. A increasing number of indevidual tend to purchase someing they need in online. The reserch show that ,it's convenient for go shopping on online and provide a variety of mode of shooping to consumer to choose.Therefore,it reduce much time go shopping at outside. However,it has some disadvantage,such as we can't identify it quality whether it's fake. Sometimes perhap that the shirt of size we choose unfit it which our buy in online.so we must be careful on online shooping. From my perspecity,I deem that it is necessary for our advisely on online shopping,Trying to realize the information about the shopping and prevent trick by the seller.if we get costly and vital,we can choose physical store so that identify the quality of the shopping clearly.